"Light didn't come with him. It was waiting above as a little dot." I like that bit quite a lot. There are some problems with the tenses not being in agreement- ie, it should be "waiting was something that shortened" or "waiting is something that shortens" Probably the first since the second paragraph is in past tense. But in terms of imagery and mood it seems really solid.
@paintandwires Thank you so much for your comment :) I'll keep that in my mind. It's one of the sentences I feel I couldn't translate as it should be.
We are an inclusive Mastodon community for everything tabletop (& more). We welcome everyone that wants to be part of the community, boardgamers, RPG players, casual gamers, party gamers, hobbyists, LARPers, game designers and publishers, RPG characters, artists, writers, vlogers, podcasters, reviewers, streamers, lego builders and more.
This is meant to be a positive and safe space for people to enjoy each other's ideas, opinion and have fun. To keep tabletop.social that way, the Code of Conduct and Rules will be applied and enforced thoroughly.
We mostly follow blockchain's blocklist.
This community uses Mutant Standard emoji, which are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.
See above for the avatar
The header is from darklavendrvoid
Join us on Discord too ! (same policies apply)